Revisions

When filming to make actions smoother and to improve quality as a group we decided to change a few things within the script. After editing this is now the new imprved script!

OWEN walking fast to booth, clearly tense about something.

OWEN enters the phone booth and tries to make a phone call but the number isn’t available.

OWEN clearly frustrated

OWEN: (distressed) Come on work!

OWEN forcefully puts down the phone, brushes hand through hair

Camera zooms out, point of view shot from HENCHMAN 1’s view

HENCHMAN 1 is on the phone, on the other end of the phone we hear MR G his superior speaking on the other end.

MR G: The Hendermann deal is going through. It’s too much of a liability to keep him alive. Get rid of him. No evidence.

HENCHMAN 1 (hesitates and then answers): Yes, sir

End of call.

OWEN comes out of the phone booth. HENCHMAN 1 approaches him pretending to be a normal citizen so he doesn’t give away his true identity and cause panic.

OWEN: [close-up shot] Have you got a phone, I need to make an important call

HENCHMAN 1:  looks in his coat pocket looks up [Reverse shot] HENCHMAN 1 punches OWEN

Black shot (text: 24 hours earlier …)